Baseline, Intervention, Result
Start with the world as it was, then introduce the change, then show the measurable outcome. Use the simplest unit that communicates impact, like “minutes saved per user per week” or “dollars per account per quarter.” Add one quote from a real user or seller to humanize the shift. This structure makes causal logic obvious, invites honest critique, and helps busy leaders grasp stakes quickly. The narrative becomes portable, reusable, and defensible across audiences with different priorities.